I became so caught up in the story that I forgot I was supposed to be remembering things to give feedback on… so no feedback this time, just a request for the next chapter.
this is so good!!! reading about jack and gillian somehow always makes me feel so much better ❤️ i seriously wish this was a novel and i had a day free so i could read the whole thing at once and then spend the rest of the day gushing over it!!!
I was so excited to come back to this tonight, after a bit of a rough day. It is exactly the kind of thing I want to read before bed. The subtle romance/tension the SUPER cozy vibes… Just what I needed :)
I keep picturing Gandalf somehow for the Wise Elf at the cafe 😅😅 Off to chapter 6, i go. And i keep picturing Jack having the same face as the guy from Atlantis... but somehow I don't have a face for Gillian yet 🤔🤔.. off to chapter 6, I go.
I’m here to become a better writer — please give me any and all feedback you have on my story or writing. Thank you in advance! 💚
I enjoying the story and the revelations are intriguing.
I’m so glad to hear this! If you have any feedback or suggestions I am happy to take it too!
“guys wait to start the movie I have to read something”
Ahhhh babe wake up, another chapter of JitBSC just dropped 😂
Very similar experience for me just that it was “I can’t make the time we said we’ll meet up, I need to do some urgent reading”
Another amazing chapter, Happy, I can’t wait for you to publish the whole thing and I can’t scribble in the margins 🥹💛
I became so caught up in the story that I forgot I was supposed to be remembering things to give feedback on… so no feedback this time, just a request for the next chapter.
That’s such great praise coming from you, thank you! 💚
Aahh sneaky little man
Thanks for reading! 😚
Really curious how Jack can just wander in there. Really excited to see this unfold
Thanks for reading! Maybe you'll find out the secret one day :)
Editor in me spotted something and had to speak up 😁. Gillian says, "What? No." to Alban, but the voiceover reads it as "What? Number."
I change "Text Normalization" to "Skip Normalization" in Eleven Labs to avoid this.
Hahaha thank you!!
this is so good!!! reading about jack and gillian somehow always makes me feel so much better ❤️ i seriously wish this was a novel and i had a day free so i could read the whole thing at once and then spend the rest of the day gushing over it!!!
THAT IS SO NICE! Thank you!!! I wish it were a finished novel too hahaha
I was so excited to come back to this tonight, after a bit of a rough day. It is exactly the kind of thing I want to read before bed. The subtle romance/tension the SUPER cozy vibes… Just what I needed :)
Oh my gosh that is so nice to hear! Sorry you had a rough day but I hope it’s turning around now 💚
Definitely :)
I keep picturing Gandalf somehow for the Wise Elf at the cafe 😅😅 Off to chapter 6, i go. And i keep picturing Jack having the same face as the guy from Atlantis... but somehow I don't have a face for Gillian yet 🤔🤔.. off to chapter 6, I go.
That is exactly what I picture in my head too!!! Thanks for reading and commenting! I’ll need to work on my description of Gillian now 💚
" you impossible woman," Haha I laughed at this, and not just because that could be my moniker.
An Elf, vampire, muffins, AND stolen books? All in one chapter? Yes.
I always get excited when I see that you posted :)
Hahaha you are impossible because you refuse to give me more chapters of your book when I demand them so politely
Well I have to wait for when you are at work.
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