I’m so sorry to disappoint but there won’t be 😭 I just haven’t been able to figure out how to add that or an actual beanstalk in without being too ridiculous 😅 something for the prequel I guess 🥺
Enjoyed the writing very much! A lot of good description to linger over. Only thing is I think the opening sentence can be tightened- more "Jack was at a loss" or your own better words.
Thank you!! That’s great feedback! My very first draft of that sentence was a bit… crass. I myself was at a loss on how to say it politely but your suggestion is perfect!
How daddy vampire locked her in with a human to feed on and she wouldn’t until she was starving. “Locked me in my room if I wouldn’t eat my vegetables.”
And with that part about the sheep and her first kiss (not with the sheep).
And that the protection spell on her and Jack’s ancestor kept her from wanting to feed like a regular vampire.
Of course there are magic beans - it makes perfect sense.
But I've no idea why! 😵
😂😂😂 can’t have a beanstalk story without the beans! 🫘
I don't want to spoil any surprises, but I've a horrible feeling you're setting me up for a GIANT cliffhanger!!
I’m so sorry to disappoint but there won’t be 😭 I just haven’t been able to figure out how to add that or an actual beanstalk in without being too ridiculous 😅 something for the prequel I guess 🥺
Ha, well I can't argue with that. Maybe just stick a golden goose omelette on the cafe menu.
That’s perfect! I’m doing it
did someone just say MAGIC BEANS?? 🙀 (seriously though. why is breaking poor Gillian's heart your biggest mission in life? 😭 She needs a hug)
HAHhahaha I thought you'd be happy that Jack was being nicer?!?! I cannot win with you people!! hahaha
But yes, poor Gillian, she really can't catch a break in life :(
Your comments always make me smile! Thank you so much for always being so supportive <3
i AM happy about Jack being nicer! but i'm so pissed it literally took the vampire king bullying Gill to get him there?? 😭 like, DUDE.
yeah, Gill needs a nice long vacation after all of this lol.
aww you have no idea how excited and happy i get when you post new chapters!! they literally make my day ❤️
You’re going to make me cry 😭😭
Finally Jack. Fi.nal.ly.
Idiot. Complete and utter idiot.
I hate you a tiny bit less now…
Hahahahahh it took him a hot minute but he is getting there 🥹
Enjoyed the writing very much! A lot of good description to linger over. Only thing is I think the opening sentence can be tightened- more "Jack was at a loss" or your own better words.
Thank you!! That’s great feedback! My very first draft of that sentence was a bit… crass. I myself was at a loss on how to say it politely but your suggestion is perfect!
But I liked your very first draft of that sentence so much more ☹️
Hahaha me too, but I haven’t had any bad words in the sorry so far so this didn’t seem like the right place to start 🥲
But Jack is in SUCH DEEP SHIT. Seems like the perfect place to me 🥺
FINALLY Jack is coming to his senses.
And, magic beans you say? Why didn't I see that coming?
Hehehehe
I’m so far behind 🙀. I just started listening today and starting chapter 8. How will I catch up?
Oh my gosh, you’re so far already. I usually only write one chapter a week so you’ll catch up in no time 😄
Jack can be very poetical about Gillian’s eyes. Any other time, he’s a shoe.
Daddy is mean. Also, he must be talking about coffee beans, right? They’re magical.
Uh oh. Just realized something. Now that the protection spell on Gillian is broken, does she like human blood now? 🧛♀️🩸🩸
She’s always liked human blood 😈 why do you think she was a convict 😈😈
Hahahah a shoe 💀
Oh. I thought she didn’t like to prey on humans.
How daddy vampire locked her in with a human to feed on and she wouldn’t until she was starving. “Locked me in my room if I wouldn’t eat my vegetables.”
And with that part about the sheep and her first kiss (not with the sheep).
And that the protection spell on her and Jack’s ancestor kept her from wanting to feed like a regular vampire.
Is she really a closet evil vampire? 😈
Hahah yeah you’re right. She doesn’t like to eat humans becuase of her human memories. Butttt she still likes the taste 🫦
Ah. Ok. I guess a vegetarian can still miss the taste of a steak 😂
Magic beans, of course! I love it.
The squeal I squelled at “magic beans”! I’m in awe at your ability to maintain, and often escalate, the tension chapter after chapter.
Onward!