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Christine Witcher's avatar

✨This is the skin of a killer, Jack✨

You managed to keep a no-action scene engaging, exciting, and well paced. No notes. Loved it. More kisses, please.

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Anoushka's avatar

oh my gosh i'm going to CRYYYYY. how could you write them finally FINALLY kissing and then take it all back to serious????

but i also LOVED THIS CHAPTER. jack's lines are as epic as ever: "A gnome? Sure. Sure, sure, sure. Yeah, of course. A gnome. Makes sense. The Keebler elves own a bakery, too, you know.” love how gill's explaining the whole story to jack like he's a little kid ("bad guys, you know") and he doesn't even seem to mind 😂

i don't know if i mentioned this, but that glimpse you wrote into chapter 13 about gillian's past and luca was very epic and i was thinking about that all throughout reading this! anyway, THIS WAS FAB and i can't wait for more!!!!!

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