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Robert C. Worstell's avatar

You've got a hit on your hands...

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Thank you so much for saying that 💚💚

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Anoushka's avatar

oh my gosh i love them 🥹 i'm also a fan of this new Jack who deems it ok to use his brain cells once in a while, genuinely missed those while they were away vacationing for like 80% of the story 🙄

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Hahahahhahahahahaha

Poor Jack just had his world thrown upside down but everyone thinks he should still be accessing all his brain cells 🥺

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Anoushka's avatar

Gill also had her world thrown upside down, MULTIPLE times might I add, but she somehow still has her brain cells intact and functioning? And you say it’s unreasonable to expect the same of Jack? 😒

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Hahahha well everyone knows girls are smarter than boys. He can’t help being a doofus 🤷‍♀️

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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

I love how this went from cute to steamy to me giggling “they need a different room right now” to things getting cute and rational again

Awesome chapter, I’m absolutely thrilled to see your progress every new chapter. And there was enough “first chapters Jack” for me to like the guy again

Also, personally, the cursive always reminded me so much of Snape from Harry Potter, that was bittersweet 😂💛

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

So glad you liked it 🥹 there will be no needing a different room in this story tho 😳 they’ve already kissed way more than I told them was allowed!

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Matt Pincott's avatar

Cake, smut and a mortalcutioner. This is basically the perfect chapter.

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

😑😂

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Riker Rhodes's avatar

Mildly afraid of even considering this

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

You’re gonna love it 😘

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Lady Of The Lake's avatar

😂😂😂 They are so weird and great.

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

They’re totally cool and not at all weird or awkward or anything like that 😤

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Focal Bonsai's avatar

Perfection. I was smiling, giggling, raising my eyebrows, clutching my pearls. All of it.

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Yay! Thanks so much for reading friend 💚💚

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Focal Bonsai's avatar

Of course! Been dying to come and catch up.

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Sapna's avatar

This is so perfect. I love Jack and Gill❤✨

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Thank you so much for reading and all the comments and restacks 💚 you have no idea how happy it makes me to see my favorite nemesis in my notifications 🥹🥹

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Sapna's avatar

Now that i am fully caught up. It will be din to bother you (evil cackle) ❤✨

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

😅😅😅😅

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LM Sypher's avatar

All I’m saying is that I’d let Gillian bite me too

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

I mean… same 🤭

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williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Weird but in a very cool way/I've enjoyed following jack and Gillian as they discover what it means to love a vampire

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Thank you so much! 💚

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Ed the Editor's avatar

Jack is way out of line here.

“Mortalcutioner” is the perfect term.

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

I thought so too. Jack is a nerd, he doesn’t understand these things

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Christine Witcher's avatar

Jack with the swooney one-liners is the absolutely best! Love the direction this ending is going.

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